final trailer

final print

My poster has changed a lot from my first rough cut, I took on the feedback that I got from my peers and made the correct changes, firstly I made it landscape and edited the opacity and saturation of the face. I then changed my background from plain black to the grainy cloud effect I have now which took me ages to get how I wanted it. it took lots of feedback and tutorials online to get the effect I wanted. from the feedback i got comments that said it was to dark and not enough colour, so now i made the white font stand out by making it brighter, also adding a blurred effect which i learnt from a tutorial on the internet, which also gives it a ghostly look. i believe the layout of my poster is much improved from my last one.

I have transformed my magazine cover from my last rough cut to this which is much improved i think, it has a more professional structure which stands out and sells the trailer of the film well. the colour palette  has stayed the same but i changed from a white background to black and made the font white. I've kept the structure of the masthead and skyline as that was the only feature which i got good feedback on from my last rough cut.

print audience feedback

print feedback

Question 1) does the poster stand out too you?

Question 2) would this poster make you want to watch the trailer?

question 3) would you change anything on the poster if so what?
question 4) what do you like and dislike about the poster?
question 5) what do you think of the choice of colour?
question 6) do the fonts work, if not why?

Peer feedback:
1) in a way, some of the aspects do but the image doesn't.
2) yes.
3)I would change the image or edit it differently and have the little face in the back more blurred out and misty make it landscape and zoom in on the face more
4)I like the fonts and the layout, I think the little face takes the attention away from the title.
5) needs at least one brighter colour.
6) yes.

1) a little bit, need something more to make it stand out
2) yes
3) add a different colour or something that catches the eye better and change the image.
4) dislike that its to dark and like the layout of it, everything seems to be in the right place.
5) to dark
6) yes

Question 1) does the magazine stand out too you?

Question 2) would this magazine cover make you want to watch the trailer?

question 3) would you change anything on the magazine if so what?

question 4) what do you like and dislike about the magazine?

question 5) what do you think of the choice of colour?

question 6) do the fonts work, if not why?

1) yes, but not in a good way, it stands out because of the bright white background but i wouldn't take a second glance.

2) no, i do not know what the film is just from this cover.

3) yes the colour of the image, maybe black and white, the font size and colour, the set out of the sell lines, the colour of the main sell line so it was readable.

4)like the layout of the masthead and the email address under it, dislike the rest of the magazine.

5) black white and green is a good colour palette just needs using differently.

6) not when all the sell lines are the same font just different sizes, add some extra fonts.

1) no

2) not really

3) the main image, the structure of sell lines.

4) like the colour scheme and i dislike the sell lines covering his face.

5) its good yeah

6) no, to simple

rough cut print

constructing logos and inter-titles

trailer rough cut